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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

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There are many places, which generate revenue only from
travel
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industry
 because of
its
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 sightseeing, unique developments or
it's
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 own history. It’s the big responsibility of locals and
authority
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 to manage
this
 well
otherwise
 there is
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 huge cost to bear. In
this
 essay, I will be discussing its positive as well as negative impacts & how to make these benefits sustainable. On one hand , touristry gives the local residents an opportunity to showcase their culture & to promote it to the nation or even global level. For, instance the Sapera Dance, a famous dance form from Rajasthan has been given
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international recognition and
this
 could happen because of the tourism and its proper showcasing. With the increase in people coming to visit a place, it gives a push to the hotel business and travel agencies, food
industry
, so it
also
 generates employment, entrepreneurship.
On the other hand
, touristry is nothing but the commercialisation of beauty, which has its own cost if not managed well.
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 main disadvantage is the increase in pollution which deteriorate the air quality. In absence of stringent rules & regulations with heavy penalties, people coming to visit the place may harm or damage the local properties. To promote the
industry
, there will be urbanisation i.e cutting down the trees etc. because of which it
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 its charm in long run. To sum up,
benefits
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the benefits
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 of the tourism
industry
 are undeniable,
however
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 there are negative impacts
also
 which cannot be ignored. In my perspective,
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rigid laws in force will definitely help to maintain
this
 sustainable source of revenue for the economy.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainable tourism
  • ecotourism
  • heritage sites
  • hospitality industry
  • tourist influx
  • cultural commodification
  • ecological footprint
  • economic diversification
  • carrying capacity
  • cultural sensitivity
  • destination marketing
  • travel advisories
  • visitor management
  • impact assessment
  • tourism revenues
  • authentic experience
  • visitor satisfaction
  • conservation efforts
  • seasonal fluctuation
  • social sustainability
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