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Nowadays more and more people are becoming overweight. What are the reasons for this? What can be the solutions?

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It is commonly witnessed that more and more
people
 are becoming overweight.
This
 trend can be ascribed to a number of reasons and it must be addressed by definite actions. The
Primary
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 reason is the eating habits of today's
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. Junk
food
 like pasta, pizza , and burgers are the ultimate culprits among all
food
 items. Persons consuming these acquire more calories than required and in no time they gain weight. These junk foods result in serious health issues like high blood pressure, heart diseases,fatty liver so on and so forth.
Moreover
,repetitive eating, eating
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 late,not having a walk after meals can be seen as the major reasons for obesity. Another clear reason is the
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 in physical activities like swimming, jogging and running. Nowadays
people
 do not much likely to do these physical activities.Apart from
this
, consistent sitting and relaxing
also
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 in
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obesity.
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 recent study conducted by an eminent Cardiologist James Hook
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Harvard University, it was observed that persons who indulge in
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physical exercises are less likely to become obese by 70 %. Several measures must be implemented to tackle
this
 sensitive issue.The
first
 solution is the healthy intake of
food
.
This
 will decline the calorie intake and will not make them obese.
Furthermore
, nutritious
food
, fresh fruits and vegetables can help to cut down weight.
The another
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 feasible solution is
people
 must involve in physical exercises like Yoga, gym sessions.Gym owners must bring out their fitness programs to attract more and more
people
.
Government
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also
 must organize health marathons to enhance awareness among
people
. To conclude, having not a proper diet and
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 of physical
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 are the contributing factors to the issue of obesity among
people
, but appropriate steps of self fitness and government assistance should be taken to tackle
this
 issue.
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