A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well-managed. What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world? Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?
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the arrival of tourists will arise and they involve with the locals. That may lead to a culture clash since the locals compel to follow foreign traditions and it leads to change the attitudes. In addition
, these cultural functions will become more commercialized than celebrating its own values in order to earn more. This
can be considered as a drawback. In addition
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However
, tourism
is beneficial when it comes to a developing country
it supports to maintain maintaining a stable economy. Since tourism
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Therefore
, it helps in several ways such
as in funds & it lifts the international barriers as well as it opens the opportunities to deal with the latest technologies. Therefore
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to grow economically socially and as well as educationally. Nevertheless
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