A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well-managed. What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world? Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

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countries depend on

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as their major income source. As

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many

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it has its own pros and cons especially if it is not controlled under a set of

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appropriate

rules and regulations.

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tourism

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major factors

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cultural, traditional, historical values and the natural beauty of a

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has these factors including a great hospitality service it is obvious that

tourism

will become a major income whereas it will lead to

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those vital values of the

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many tourists. Whenever there is a cultural or a traditional occasion in a

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the arrival of tourists will arise and they involve with the locals. That may lead to a culture clash since the locals compel to follow foreign traditions and it leads to change the attitudes.

In addition

, these cultural functions will become more commercialized than celebrating its own values in order to earn more.

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can be considered as a drawback.

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tourism

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the youth by bringing down

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life styles

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dress code

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changes and eating habits. The drugs and

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for increase college dropouts & crimes. When it comes to

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nature & world heritages, the risk of polluting these natural attractions is high when the rules

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have not been implemented properly.

However

,

tourism

is beneficial when it comes to a developing

country

it supports to maintain maintaining a stable economy. Since

tourism

helps to improve the infrastructure and it is a source of receiving the foreign currency. With

tourism

, it supports

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industries like hotels & accommodations, transportation as well as

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indigenous

indigenous productions by increasing the job opportunities and creating

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demand in world's market.

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, when the

country

becomes famous as a tourist destination it may lead to

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the attention from world organizations.

Therefore

, it helps in several ways

such

as in funds & it lifts the international barriers as well as it opens the opportunities to deal with the latest technologies.

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although

tourism

has drawbacks, I agree that it has a outweigh

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its positives since it carries huge advantages to a

country

to grow economically socially and as well as educationally.

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this

industry should manage under

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rules & regulations so that

country

can contain its maximum benefits.