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It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to the remote natural environment, such as the south pole. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

#scientists #tourists #travel #environment #pole #development
Tremendous
advancement
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of
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 science and technology have opened pathways to humans to experience various types of places with different climates across the world including the
Antactic
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Antarctic
 region. The experts contend that human entrance to
such
 places creates both positive and negative consequences. On the one hand, scientists and other travellers are able to visit a number of geographical
areas
 with
extream
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extreme
 weather conditions
as a result
 of inventions of new scientific and technological means which assist to survive in
such
areas
.
Consequently
, the crucial information
have
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 been founding in
related
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 to
environment
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the environment
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, indigenous animals and plants and native
people
, thereby developing these
areas
. Some countries earn considerable luxury through tourism while improving the quality of life of
people
,
hence
importance
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the importance
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 of travelling and discovering facts regarding
such
 types of
remote
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the remote
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 natural
environment
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environments
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.
Moreover
, other
people
 get
opportunity
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the opportunity
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 to experience
variety
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 of natural
habitates
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habitats
.
On the other hand
, human
tevelling
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travelling
 to these challenging
areas
 can have several drawbacks
such
 as destructing the balance of
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eco system
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ecosystem
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.
For instance
, glaciers in the Arctic and
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Antarctic
 regions can be fastly melted due to human activities.
Therefore
,
another countries
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 in the world face various kinds of environmental conflicts due to
increasing
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of
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sea
level
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In addition
, as
result
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 of introducing artificial and
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suff
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stuff
 to these pure ecological systems reinforce
the
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environmental pollution. Meanwhile,
arrival
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 of modern customs and traditions might be caused to
deminish
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diminish
 the local tradition gradually
hence
 reducing cultural identity. In fact,
openinig
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opening
 a new window to
developed
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 world is compelled habitants to move
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another places
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 and escape from their difficult lifestyles.
Nontherless
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Nonetheless
, implementing well planned, structured and echo friendly development programmes will be helped to overcome these disadvantages and highlight the positive results.
Such
 means should aim to retain native
people
 there, protect their cultural values and environment while developing these remote
areas
 to enhance to quality of life of these
people
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • remote natural environment
  • scientific research
  • climate change
  • environmental preservation
  • economic benefits
  • conservation efforts
  • habitat disruption
  • pollution
  • cultural disruption
  • indigenous populations
  • commercialization
  • safety risks
  • personal enrichment
  • ecosystems
  • awareness
  • appreciation for nature
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