There are an increasing number of advertisements that target children. Many parents are worried that these advertisements may be harmful to their children. However, some companies claim that their advertising provides children with useful information. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

More

advertisements

are aimed at

children

than ever before. Parents and companies have

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views about whether it is harmful to

children

. Parents tend to believe that the

advertisements

provide

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misleading information to their

children

and lead to their bad

habits

. Many

advertisements

aimed that

children

promote junk food and sugary drinks that can

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the

children

think eating sneak as beneficial as vegetables. By advertising the goods with attractive packaging and interesting lines from kid’s

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actors or actresses,

Children

can be easily tempted to eat chips and soda rather than something “ boring” and plain but actually nutritious food.

Therefore

, it is likely for

children

to develop bad

habits

and even justify their deeds by these misleading

advertisements

.

However

, the companies,

on the other hand

, claim that

instead

of promoting the

advertisements

which could misdirect the

children

to keep bad

habits

, they

also

promote educational toys and games for the little viewers .

For example

, many youtube and television commercials inform

children

of the new toys and games that can develop their thinking skills and language skills, some of which are endorsed by well-educated celebrities who are good role models for

children

. board game and puzzle game can

also

help

children

enjoy taking part in training their brains and working with

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with useful team cooperation skill. They learn how to solve problems through the entertaining process. My own opinion is that

advertisements

aimed at

children

should be regulated as the movie rating system does.The potential risks and

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warnings should be displayed and easily visible by the customers. Well-Parenting and enough time

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companion with

children

are

also

of vital importance to help them build good values and

habits

.