Do you agree with the below statement ? A zoo serves no purpose.

It can be seen that

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enormous number of

zoos

are established around the globe.Various species can be seen by visiting

such

places.Safari gardens and

zoos

are very famous among visitors who love

animals

, birds and other creatures.Some people contend that

zoos

do not have exact purpose and others argue that it facilitates people to visit rare

animals

which could not be watched easily.In my view,

Zoos

contribute more negative

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on

animals

compared to positive effects. Exhibit

animals

do not live in real habitats in the

zoo

or open park environments.Most of the

animals

or birds have to spend their whole life in cages or small spaces.Result

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, they cannot behave as natural habitats they were in.

For example

, Elephants live as

flock

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, when they want to Choose

partner

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for

mateing

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mating

matting

, they consider many qualities of female partners.

Then

they try to move away from the flock and live alone for almost three months for their breeding purposes.

Such

freedom is not

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available in the

zoo

.

In addition

, food patterns are

also

affected due to

lack

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of resources.Though

zoos

are one of

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attractive

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spots,

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could not show true animal's

behaviorals

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behavioural

behaviour

behaviours

.Poor

maintaining

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, poor feeding can have spread clusters of diseases to them.

Therefore

, their life span has become short .

Zoos

and Safari gardens cannot earn a considerable sum of money concerning

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expenditures

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are allocated by

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for the maintenance.The main income of the

Zoo

comes from visitors,

However

, most of the animal parks keep some species who have

imported

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from other countries.Hens cool rooms, special treatments must provide to them.

Foe

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instant, Penguins native area is the coldest component of the world like

Antatica

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Antarctica

.If a

Zoo

wants to keep

such

birds in tropical countries

garden

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, they have to spend more money to adopt them.

However

, they do not have income by only selling tickets to travellers at the counters.

Therefore

it is

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burden to the economy in poor countries certainly. In conclusion,

Zoo

is

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one of

tourists

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attractive destinations. People can

vist

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visit

and relax

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by watching and taking

phots

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with beautiful wild

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.

In contrast

,

zoos

are not better places

animals

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to live. Maintaining cost and negative consequences can prove that the '

zoo

serves no

purpose'

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.