Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid.

It has been suggested that topic for discussion, more wealthy

countries

don'

t

assist once in a blue moon,

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this

situation can'

t

solve

this

poorness so the support must be realized by progressed

countries

more than financial aid. In my opinion, each

country

shouldn'

t

be forced to give various help and I have got some notions about on

this

matter.

Firstly

, as a matter of fact, there are more people in the growth

countries

and the enactments had better enforced by the government for their nation.

Moreover

, we can see that both international and national contracts,declarations and some

countries

in the legislation that each

country

is to help their folk. I believe that if

countries

commence (assist) with both financial and other enactments, they will not support their people and probably the crisis will establish in the

country

step by step,

in addition

as a pattern, maybe the tax will be increased.

Secondly

, in fact, recently, the condition has been changing always. I have read that from social media, there are some reasons. One of them, rich

countries

can'

t

manage money, they share income for various

countries

. My own view on

this

matter, money is to be saved by the government or they ought to spend more useful obligations for their

country

. As far as I know,

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helping has been utilized by some

countries

as a trade. For ,instance financial aid is being given by developing

countries

as a credit, afterwards poor

countries

should pay more than getting before. Briefly, the rising

country

shouldn'

t

be coerced

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helping because it is necessary to consider

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country

. Taking everything into consideration, each government can give a lot of money,

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the others mustn'

t

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more because every

country

has got certain duties, obligations,plans and so on. The growth

countries

can'

t

enforce support constantly.