Some TV programs and violent video games are harmful for children.How harmful are they? What can be done to solve these problems?

Most

children

nowadays are being obsessed with many

TV

programmes and

games

which consist of violent

contents

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.

Although

these can bring many adverse

effects

to them, there are some potential solutions

which

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can be put forward to tackle

this

circumstance. In

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essay, I will outline

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effects

related to

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topic as well as possible methods to mitigate them. There are several detrimental

effects

of violent

games

and

TV

programmes on young people. The most significant of which is the likelihood of

children

imitating wrong behaviour from these sources.

This

is because many

games

are involved

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a criminal's character, resulting in

children

might participating in juvenile delinquency in real life,

such

as shoplifting or joy-riding. As well as

this

,

children

's education and health may

also

get tremendously adverse

effects

. If

children

are addicted to

games

or

TV

and squander their time all day and night, they will probably not only receive a lower grade

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but

also

might suffer deteriorating health. Despite there being many aforementioned hazards, many effective solutions which come from the collaboration between parents, schools and governments can alleviate them.

First

of

all

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parents should thoroughly pay attention to their

children

's activities and give them appropriate advice about benefits and drawbacks belonging to each activity.

Moreover

, School could

also

be the main player to solve

this

problem as they can establish some creative activities, including practise sport or music, and encourage

children

to joy them.

Last

but not least, the government as the authority should launch some policy to decease harmful contents in every media whether might legis some laws to prohibit them ,

for example

escalating tax rates on their products. To sum up, there are many negative aspects on

children

caused by violent

contents

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in

TV

programmes and

games

,

nevertheless

, I believe that some proficient methods from the association of family,school and government could play a significant role to tackle

this

problem.