In most part of the world, the volume of traffic is growing at an alarming rate. In the form of an assignment, discuss the main traffic problems in your country, their causes and possible solutions.

In the current
advance
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era,
traffic
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congestion issue is ubiquitous. I will discuss the causes along with the
soultions
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solutions
with appropriate exemplification to demonstrate
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and prove
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in the subsequent paragraph. The central reason behind
this
is twofold,
firstly
, nowadays many companies are providing lots of
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on vehicles
such
as
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, cars etc. Which is very accomplishable for
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people
.
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these
affordable
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priced motors many
people
tend to buy
motorvehicle
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motor vehicle
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enhance the pose on the road. For the solution, Government should fix a particular range of the vehicle for sale so that
people
start
prefering
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preferring
public transport.
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, an extensive report published by The Times Of India illustrated that there had been seen a 10% hike in the purchase of
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personal transport
equipments
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after
after
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diwali
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sale on vehicles. It is intuitively obvious that the lower the rate of
vehicle
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goes, the higher the number of transport will be on the road.
Secondly
, lack of requisite knowledge or lack of
persistance
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persistence
of traffic rules
also
increases the traffic volume on the road. Because of
this
many
people
deprived
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reaching office or destination on time. For
this
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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