You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter: introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Sir Peter, I'm writing

this

letter regarding some issues me and my family are facing with a few broken pieces of furniture. My name is Amanda and together with my family, we are spending few days on your Airbnb property. We came from Paris

this

morning and we just arrived at your place. A beautiful lady received us and explained everything about the accommodation. I can not wait to spend our vacation here and explore London.

On the other hand

, I am facing some problems with the table and chairs in the kitchen, for me, it looks like there are some bugs in it and I do not really want to touch it, I am pretty sure it is not safe to use it,

also

the bathtub in the main bathroom is leaking and I think some parts are broken. Due to that, as you said in your advertisement if the client has any issues with the property,

such

as internet connection, furniture problems or anything else, we should call or email the landlord immediately. Do you think you could send someone to have a look? I will be here until tomorrow night, but after that, I have some plannings with my family and I am not sure at what time we will be back. Looking forward to hearing from you. Sincerely, Amanda Barh

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8 paragraphs

225 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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Topic Vocabulary:

Dear
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction
regarding
the condition
furniture
belongings
for instance
damaged
broken
worn-out
appliance
household items
it is unacceptable
inconvenient
inhabitable
affecting
negatively
urgent attention
replacement
repair
resolve
maintenance
prompt response
Thank you for your attention
Yours sincerely

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