In most successful organizations, some people believe that communication between managers and workers are the most important factor, other people say that other factors are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People assume the most essential key between managers and workers is

communication

while others believe that there are more essential keys to

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successful

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organization. In my opinion, I will support the

first

idea and

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both views will be elaborated in the following paragraphs.

Communication

is one of the key

factors

to strengthen

interpersonal

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the interpersonal

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relationship

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relationships

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in

workplace

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the workplace

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between managers and workers, especially when conducting a project.

Communication

become

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a bridge to solve

conflict

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the conflict

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that might be risen among team members.

Thus

, it is important for

employee

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the employee

an employee

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to always communicate their problem with the supervisor to find the solution.

Moreover

, good

communication

would benefit in building good teamwork.

For instance

, they could maintain good

relationship

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personally and professionally. As the result, it would provide brainstorming and feedback for continuous improvement.

On the other hand

, there are other

factors

that could lead

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success for

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apart from

communication

such

as integrity and

trust

. Integrity would lead

employees

to work according to the companies’

value

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values

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.

Furthermore

,

by

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giving

trust

to the

employees

would motivate them to work more productive and be responsible.

For example

, managers who

trust

their

employees

could empower them to work happily.

Nevertheless

, these other

factors

might not happen if there is no

communication

between manager and worker to have

same

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vision to achieve

successful

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the successful

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goal in

organization

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the organization

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. In conclusion, from my point of view,

communication

is the key success to build

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a relationship

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relationship

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relationships

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between

employees

and

employer

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employers

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to create

positive

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a positive

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environment in a workplace. Without good

communication

, I believe that they could not communicate their purpose as well and the other

factors

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nothing.

However

, integrity and

trust

also

play important roles to build great interaction in

professional

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job.