In most successful organizations, some people believe that communication between managers and workers are the most important factor, other people say that other factors are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People assume the most essential key between managers and workers is

communication

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while others believe that there are more essential keys to

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successful

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organization. In my opinion, I will support the

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both views will be elaborated in the following paragraphs.

Communication

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is one of the key

factors

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to strengthen

interpersonal

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the interpersonal

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relationship

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relationships

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in

workplace

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the workplace

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between managers and workers, especially when conducting a project.

Communication

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become

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a bridge to solve

conflict

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the conflict

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that might be risen among team members.

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, it is important for

employee

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the employee

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to always communicate their problem with the supervisor to find the solution.

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, good

communication

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would benefit in building good teamwork.

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, they could maintain good

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relationships

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personally and professionally. As the result, it would provide brainstorming and feedback for continuous improvement.

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, there are other

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that could lead

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success for

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apart from

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such

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as integrity and

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. Integrity would lead

employees

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to work according to the companies’

value

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values

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.

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,

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giving

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to the

employees

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would motivate them to work more productive and be responsible.

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, managers who

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their

employees

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could empower them to work happily.

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, these other

factors

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might not happen if there is no

communication

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between manager and worker to have

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vision to achieve

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the successful

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goal in

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the organization

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. In conclusion, from my point of view,

communication

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is the key success to build

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a relationship

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relationship

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relationships

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between

employees

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and

employer

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employers

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to create

positive

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a positive

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environment in a workplace. Without good

communication

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, I believe that they could not communicate their purpose as well and the other

factors

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means

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nothing.

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, integrity and

trust

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also

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play important roles to build great interaction in

professional

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a professional

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job.