Much of the food people eat gets transported from farms thousands of miles away. Some believe it would be better for the environment and economy if people only ate food from local farmers. Would the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

As a result
of
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globalization,
food
sources have been becoming internationally, which is blamed for the noxious repercussions for the environment. A number of people,
thus
, believe that prioritizing local edibles can be the superior
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for environmental situations.
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essay suggests an utterance about its pros and cons attached with logical reasons. Apparently, consuming just the indigenous products can rehabilitate the habitats.
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immense harmfulness that transporting foodstuffs pours out, as the emission of deleterious gases of vehicles has been promoting the process of
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effect. We have witnessed scorching heat in some nations
such
as Canada recently, the USA recently, which causes us alarm about the seriousness of the ongoing issue, rooted partly
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transporting
food
. Not to mention the coal and oil dilapidation, pushing the worldwide energy source into the looming extinction risks . Eliminating numerous miles for wasting energy and poisoning habitats by using local foods, natives not only are able to inhibit the devastating possibilities mentioned above, but
also
active the local trading to mount stably, while enabling access to cheap, unadulterated products.
By contrast
, pausing all of the
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and international foodstuff shipment is synonymous with many dilemmas that many areas have to confront. Reality shows that there are some cities specialized for a particular function but not agriculture; and
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precondition may be not available for all regions of all countries, Japan, Singapore
for instance
.
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,
food
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predictable results if supply chains are congested.
Furthermore
, it is
such
a catastrophe for some prestigious restaurants which reserve cosmopolitan delicacies as their signatures. In a bigger picture, the slump of
food
trading can induce a multitude of negative influences on the national producers, while products are not sold at
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adequate price and bid scale as they should have been. Not to mention the degradation of transport services, which is the main income of a group of people. In short, turning back on the exporting and importing of
food
or not,
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is a choice in development strategies of each nation, depending on how they evaluate what is overriding and more worthy, monetary or environmental value.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbon footprint
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • sustainable agriculture
  • food miles
  • locavore (a person who endeavors to eat only locally grown or produced food)
  • seasonality
  • food sovereignty
  • agricultural exports
  • dietary diversity
  • economies of scale
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