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Nowadays a few people take their family with them abroad whenever they got on a business trip. Is it a positive or negative in your opinion? To what extent do you support this development?

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These days ,some people
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 their families along with them on
business
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trip
.A group of people believes that it would make the relationship strong,while others think that
this
 development can put
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 impact
in
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 their work .I believe
this
 trend has more benefits than drawbacks. There are numerous advantages to take the family members on
business
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trip
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.
Firstly
,
this
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employees becomes able to look after their children and would provide support to elder parents in case of an adverse condition.
Hence
, they stay connected with their family members and can enjoy the
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 and love .
Secondly
,family members can get
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 to see other counties and experience different cultures and languages,which would help in
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 their horizons. On the darker side,taking families on
business
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trip
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 may
sometime
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sometimes
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 distract the people from their work.It would become quite expensive for employees to make
an
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bread and butter in specially developed countries .
Moreover
,family
memebers
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members
 maybe not
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 with place and language
,
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may
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 make them
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 and isolated . To conclude,bringing the families on
business
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trip
 could be advantageous
alongwith
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along with
a long with
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make
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 necessary for employees to make a balance between personal and professional life.
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