Tourism is an ever growing industry. What benefits do you think tourism brings to individuals and society?
Toursits
are travelling around the world and making Correct your spelling
Tourists
this
a multi billion
dollar industry which is increasingly growing Add a hyphen
multi-billion
in
a rapid pace. There are countless Change preposition
at
advantgaes
to both Correct your spelling
advantages
society
and as individuals. Change to a plural noun
societies
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essay will outline those
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that mertis
mertis
.
To being with, Individuals can meet new people from Correct your spelling
merits
different
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a different
the different
background
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backgrounds
This
will allow them to understand their clutural
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cultural
culture
hertiage
. Correct your spelling
heritage
For instance
, people from America are more prone to travel to different destination
comparing to others. Another aspect is Fix the agreement mistake
destinations
religous
, Correct your spelling
religious
where
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whereas
as
an individual can learn about a Change preposition
apply
particluar
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particular
country
's traditional values. Which will help to undersand
and respect each other. Correct your spelling
understand
For example
, when a person goes to a HIndu
temple, he or she must remove their Correct your spelling
Hindu
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footwear
footwears
at the entrance and Correct your spelling
footwear
then
enter.
Moreover
, when a country
experiences more toursits
, it will help the society to come up with various business ideas to meet new foreign investors. Correct your spelling
tourists
Such
as, in India
many from western countries visit there and start up new businesses along with the locals. Add a comma
,India
This
concept will overall boost the economy and open new
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a new
door
for the social norm.
In conclusion, It is clear that Fix the agreement mistake
doors
this
industry is a key factor as a country
and as a person. Each country
needs to invest more on
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in
toursim
and come with strategies to overcome obstacles.Correct your spelling
tourism
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