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in some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might be this case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative situation?

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Nowadays, having a place
for
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live
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is credited to one of the most important basic needs in our society. While
people
 in some countries believe that owning a
home
 is a great deal, it might be a contentious issue for some
people
 who live in the big cities considering the payment that
absolutely
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 higher than renting for it. We must acknowledge that owning a
home
 could be a good investment. As the tremendous growth of interest rates have been recorded in some countries for a decade, it would be beneficial for us
investing
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 in
this
 property.
Furthermore
, it might be a greater number of growths would
be take
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 place in the future.
In addition
, owning a
home
 could give us a guarantee in our lies in a better way at a moment.
However
, investing in
this
 type of property necessitates
people
 an enormous capital of money. It would be difficult for
people
 who live in big cities to fulfil
this
 requirement. Not only the capital expenditures
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 but
also
 operation and maintenance expenditures that should buyers think
before
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 investing in
this
 property.
In addition
, some
people
does
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 not live for a long time in a specific city; they should move to another city (or even country) any time because of reasons relating to work.
Thus
, it might be reasonable for
people
 to choose a renting one, which is cheaper and affordable for the majority of citizens. In conclusion, it might be clear for me to believe that the importance of owning a
home
 is a negative situation. Having a
rent
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home
 might be suitable for the majority of
people
 in big cities in
this
 modern and highly expensive era.
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