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some people say that it's better to teach language students in small classes, whereas others think the number of people does not matter. discuss both sides and give your opinion.

#people #language #students #classes #matter
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 not important. according to my
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 do not clear their all
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 it will hard to get success in their life. "the international school" in
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hesitation
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. they can
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perform
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 including co-operation, communication, and other that can aidful for future when they will work in teams. to conclude, small
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 to perform different activities.
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