Many companies offer their employees the opportunity to work from home. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of working from home for the company.

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pandemic has affected
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of
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working remotely has become essential considering employee safety. While some people believe
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new normal is beneficial for organisations, others disagree.
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situation. Every situation comes with
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own advantages and disadvantages.
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, introduction to remote work has brought ample
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pros for workers who felt immense pressure while working in the office in
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corporate environment. With
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it has been observed in many organisations. Other than reduced stress
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, employees are getting extra time to involve themselves in activities to implement new strategies for
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of
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business
as well as personal growth since they don't invest time in
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, working remotely may create a major communication gap between teams.
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team mates
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, sometimes due to technical issues
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as internet connectivity, many major discussions would get
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, finding a balance between personal and professional life could be difficult since most
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people are living with family.
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, working women may find
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situation difficult since they will be doing all household chores as well as office duties. It could result
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stretched working hours as well. In conclusion, remote work can be not only productive but
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rewarding for companies if they could find a balance by introducing certain programmes for employees which will enable them to perform at their best.
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