Turnover intentions of staff and impact for the company

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is commonly observed among executives who could be categorized as generation X and Y. Their retention period was much lower than what the company expected at the time of hiring them into the business. During the initial experience in the workplace, familiarizing the culture observing stagnation in career growth or development has convinced the majority to terminate their jobs and secure better positions elsewhere. Some even have changed the trade.
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losing departmental heads had excessively and tremendously affected the company in terms of performance and growth. But the greater threat for the company was when ex-employees move into competitors. The impact was immeasurable with the risk of losing knowledge, expertise, and confidentiality to rivalry.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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