In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sum of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, in
this
sophisticated world
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,world
people
prefer fastest
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the fastest
transportation
services
. Train
is a faster public Add an article
The train
transportation
vehicle and some people
believe to spend more money to make more railway
lines
between cities
. Many people
think improvement
in existing public Add an article
the improvement
an improvement
transportation
. In my opinion, money should be invest
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be invested
be investing
into
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in
improvement
of already existed public Add an article
the improvement
an improvement
transportation
services
.
Trains are the best way to reach faster to the destination but, to make railway
lines
between cities
it is very risky and it might be the cause of major accidents because of traffic and crowd of the city
. Moreover
, to construct railway
lines
trough
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through
cities
it will be very conjusted
. Correct your spelling
confused
congested
conjured
For instance
, Mumbai is one of the busiest city
in the world and there are many Fix the agreement mistake
cities
railway
lines
in between the city
and people
experienced very inconvinient
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inconvenient
idea
to make Fix the agreement mistake
ideas
railway
lines
throgh
the Correct your spelling
through
city
. Because, city
is already very crowded and it has many tourist spots so, hordes of tourists visit there every year. Mumbai Add an article
the city
also
called Add a missing verb
is also
as
dream Correct your spelling
a
city
so many come for seaching
jobs and almost all the giant companies are in the middle of the Correct your spelling
searching
teaching
city
. Train
station and Add an article
The train
railway
lines
also
takes
more space so it is very uncomfortable for every Change the verb form
take
people
.
However
, other public transportation
services
works
properly and professionally it will be so relaxing for everyone. Change the verb form
work
For example
, buses are so convinient
and comfortable because buses can run on the same road and Correct your spelling
convenient
it
can stop everywhere so Correct pronoun usage
they
people
can get in
the Change preposition
on
bus
and get off the bus
from anywhere. Also
, they do not have to take another auto to drop to
the Change preposition
at
train
station and then
train
drop them to the destination it seems exhausted. Add the particle
totrain
Bus
can pick up from home and drop directly the destination and it is possible only by investing more money and Add an article
The bus
A bus
improvement
into the bus
service.
In conclusion, trains for long
journey will definitely Add an article
the long
makes
sense but Change the verb form
make
railway
lines
between cities
it is very lengthy and hectic for people
. Government should make sensible improvement
Fix the agreement mistake
improvements
in
the existing public Change preposition
to
transportation
services
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