Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is undeniable that many children at present must have a lot of

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stepping into the achievement of them. Some

people

say that

History

learning is one of the most vital of education, while others think that children should learn

Science

and

Technology

subject

rather than

History

. From my point of view, I think that learning on all

subjects

can offer both

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advantages and

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disadvantages. In the following paragraph, both views of

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topic will be outlined in the detail. It is true to say that

History

subject

is one of the significant school

subjects

because

History

learning can help

people

to realize the value of the cultural heritage that their ancestors have accumulated, and

History

learning can make humans

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know the information from the past to the present for adapting in their life.

For example

, ancient

people

were frequently constructed accommodations near the river because the river is the food source, but their houses were often flooded, as the result,

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at the present have

knowledge

about the choice of residence.

However

,

History

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some topics

such

as colonization can cause social conflicts of some nations because their land used to be a colony of the other party.

On the contrary

, many parents think that

Science

and

Technology

learning

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the better rather than

History

learning due to

Science

and

Technology

subjects

can create the popular career

such

as doctor and scientist that are more reliable than a historian nowadays.

Additionally

, parents believe that

science

helps to be competent in the community due to

people

who have

science

knowledge

will play an important role in

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development, and learning in

Science

and

Technology

subjects

can gain many ideas and many

knowledge

which can help them to solve problems and to improve mental and physical in their life. At the same time, the

study

in

Science

and

Technology

can cause some drawbacks.

For instance

, some scientists are mixing drugs for selling on

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major money. In conclusion, I think that learning in

History

,

Science

and

Technology

subjects

have both the benefits and the drawback.

Therefore

, it is recommended that children and teenagers should be able to choose the

subject

to

study

by themselves, but they should be under the guideline of parents or teachers. If they do not want to

study

History

subject

or

Science

and

Technology

subjects

, they will not be forced by their family of teachers.