Students are becoming more and more reliant on the Internet. While the Internet is convenient, it has many negative effects and its use for educational purposes should be restricted. How far do you agree with this statement?

the use of the

internet

has become the order of the day

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various students. From my

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I believe that they are being an

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overdependence

which leads to many

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. I shall explain why the

internet

is becoming a critical contraption in students life.

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a feature of the

internet

is going hand in hand especially in several sources of information. Presumably, never helps student individual opportunity to get

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previous study was conducted in Australia among 300 students in primary schools to evaluate how was an

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affected on learning skills.

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, they found missed of capable thinking out of the box

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generation. Even though

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plagiarism is considered

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a conflict issue and it might be followed by copyrights violation. but

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would be using for cheating is a true burden for tutors in consumed

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answers over the webs dependently.

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irresponsible and dishonest.

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the best way to tackle these disadvantages is increasing an observation that

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by upper hands

such

as: administration of school or university

accordingly

with restricted punishment if it needs for exact punctuality.

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, promote awareness for using

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pretty well and maintain

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author publication rights. in

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the

internet

has two positive and negative ways, so keep us to support to the benefits and strive to spread

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concept.