In many countries, the government prioritizes economic growth above all other concerns. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this

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In many states around the world, states administrations are considering their revenue growth of utmost importance over all other issues. The pros of
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strategy are better public services of that
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increased export business, while
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of pollution and poverty within the nations. More public funds in a
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more money to enhance the public sector. Entities like healthcare, insurance and education of any nation can be managed effectively if an adequate level of financial resources
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available for enhancement. Another benefit is to develop manufacturing sector to produce goods and services locally which reduces import and expand the export for a nation.
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, China has started the manufacturing of almost all electronics which has expanded their export business and boost their economy.
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, there are severe consequences on the environment due to an increase in manufacturing units. Building more factories means more pollution within the
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nature.
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initiative has another drawback of insufficient jobs if the welfare services are not well managed.
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may lead to poverty and death due to hunger hit the
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, allowing an industry in populated areas and
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calling it off as it is generating a lot of smoke is really difficult. In conclusion,
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financial growth may help a nation to stand out at a global level by not depending on others for basic necessities,
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there are
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drawbacks of greenhouse gases and unemployment.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prioritizes
  • economic growth
  • employment opportunities
  • public services
  • tax revenues
  • infrastructure development
  • environmental degradation
  • industrial expansion
  • income inequality
  • wealth accrues
  • neglect
  • social issues
  • metrics
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