Some people think the government should establish free libraries in each town. Others believe that it is a waste of money since people can access the Internet to obtain information. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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that the government ought to construct

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that do not require any money from the public in every city. Others,

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, claim that it would be pouring money down the drain to do that due to the

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being an enormous source of knowledge. Despite

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access is ubiquitous nowadays,

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essay agrees with the former idea since

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does not have an

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connection.

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with, the proponents of the idea that

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are unnecessary

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that the

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is in almost everyone’s pocket in the

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.

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to say, most

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would prefer to research on the

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in order to learn something new rather than going to a place physically and searching for the information they need.

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is why asking

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one’s mobile phone or computer is far more time and money-saving. As a natural consequence, the demand for

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may be reduced and building new ones would be a waste of sources.

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, a

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in Turkey transformed into a car park, because the managers realised that there

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been only 100

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that went to the

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since 2019. On the other hand,

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who support the construction of free

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assert that the

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may not be accessible in each town. Especially in impoverished areas, while

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are not able to afford

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their most basic needs, it would be illogical to ask them for providing their homes or mobile phones with the

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.

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of that approach, establishing new accessible

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may encourage them to read or study, which eventually may recover their situation.

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carried out in the most underprivileged parts of France revealed that 50 % of

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under 40 years old have never been to a

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before. In conclusion, some assert that the

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is enough for being knowledgeable about a topic and founding new structures for

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to go and read or study is just being extravagant.

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,

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essay states that it may be invaluable for some groups of

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to go

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library

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and reach books without any payment because of their financial instability. Due to

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fact, free

libraries

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should be built in every province.