Some people think the government should establish free libraries in each town. Others believe that it is a waste of money since people can access the Internet to obtain information. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is thought by some
people
that the government ought to construct
libraries
that do not require any money from the public in every city. Others,
however
, claim that it would be pouring money down the drain to do that due to the
Internet
being an enormous source of knowledge. Despite
the
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Internet
access is ubiquitous nowadays,
this
essay agrees with the former idea since
every one
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does not have an
Internet
connection.
To begin
with, the proponents of the idea that
libraries
are unnecessary
think
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that the
Internet
is in almost everyone’s pocket in the
modern day
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.
That is
to say, most
people
would prefer to research on the
Internet
in order to learn something new rather than going to a place physically and searching for the information they need.
This
is why asking
to
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one’s mobile phone or computer is far more time and money-saving. As a natural consequence, the demand for
libraries
may be reduced and building new ones would be a waste of sources.
For example
, a
library
in Turkey transformed into a car park, because the managers realised that there
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been only 100
people
that went to the
library
since 2019. On the other hand,
people
who support the construction of free
libraries
assert that the
Internet
may not be accessible in each town. Especially in impoverished areas, while
people
are not able to afford
to
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their most basic needs, it would be illogical to ask them for providing their homes or mobile phones with the
Internet
.
Instead
of that approach, establishing new accessible
libraries
may encourage them to read or study, which eventually may recover their situation.
For instance
, a survey
that
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carried out in the most underprivileged parts of France revealed that 50 % of
people
under 40 years old have never been to a
library
before. In conclusion, some assert that the
Internet
is enough for being knowledgeable about a topic and founding new structures for
people
to go and read or study is just being extravagant.
Nevertheless
,
this
essay states that it may be invaluable for some groups of
people
to go
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library
and reach books without any payment because of their financial instability. Due to
this
fact, free
libraries
should be built in every province.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • public libraries
  • community centers
  • educational programs
  • democratize access
  • socio-economic status
  • resources
  • reliable internet access
  • digital infrastructure
  • forward-thinking
  • technological advancements
  • digital literacy
  • online educational resources
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