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In most parts of the world people are living longer. What are the possible causes of this situation? Is this a negative or positive development?

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Studies have found that a long lifespan may be linked to genetics,
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 other factors can be a reason for longer living listed below.
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 to easily identify and treat,
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 the well-being of individuals.
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lifestyle
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 can be a better contributing factor to a
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 living, in our
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modern
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 most people are
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 of the beneficial needs for exercise and diet modifications which
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 actually helped
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 of people in prolonging their life
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. proper diet modification and exercise has now been adopted by many people with is, it has made a great impact on the lives of so many,
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 person who has been thought by a dietician on how to control their food intake and has
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 benefits in doing it.
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environment
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 has a huge factor that contributes to our
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 an environment that has so
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 pollutions has caused
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ultraviolet
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ontributing
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contributing
 factor in causing cancer. with proper management of our environments the risk of heath challenges is reduced to the
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opinion
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, it is a positive development because the advantage is higher than the disadvantage.
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