Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?

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ratio

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have been increasing in

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recent years, and the

reasons

behind the surge of

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phenomenon are several. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall discuss the

reasons

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behind

this

issue and

along with

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the suggested

solutions

to limit the

increase

of criminal activity.

First

and foremost, the causes behind the

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of crimes amongst societies recently are many.

However

,

one

of the vital

reasons

is the

unemployment

issue. According to a study that had been conducted by

Dr.

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Williams at the

university

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of Chicago, he

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that the recent rise of the crime

level

amongst youth is linked to the

increase

of

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unemployment

level

. To illustrate, crimes usually

increase

at

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the

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poorer

neighborhoods

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due to the limited

level

of education, which

lead

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to

unemployment

. A perfect example

for

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this

, the 7th Avenue in Chicago, which

known

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to be

one

of the most dangerous

neighborhoods

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in the United State.

However

, many

solutions

had been presented during

last

year.

One

of these

solutions

,

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was establishing a craftsmanship academy

at

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the

neighborhoods

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of the less privileged people, where they can teach them a craft that they choose, in order to be their source of income after graduating from the academy.

Additionally

, placed cameras

at

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dangerous

neighborhoods

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have been Shown a

reduce

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in the criminal activity

level

. In conclusion, crime

level

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levels

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have been increasing in

the

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recent years, due to many

reasons

. The most vital

one

was the

increase

of

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the

unemployment

level

amongst young people.

Solutions

for

this

phenomenon had been presented in

this

essay.