Crime appear to be rising in most countries in the word, especially among young people. Identify the possible cause of this trend, and propose some solutions you think would be effective.

These days,

crime

may frequently

be occurred

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occur

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in both developed and developing countries, and

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also

criminals may tend to be younger than ever before.

This

essay will discuss three main causes associated with the

crime

and suggest three possible

solution

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. Perhaps, the major factor here is

education

program

that is

related to

prevent from doing

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crime

is not sufficient in

education

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curriculum.

This

means that school

not

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almost warns students may commit petty

crime

such

as

intimidate

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elderly people, playing truant and

drop

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litter which

are

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potentially

opening

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a pathway

in

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to more serious crimes later on. Another factor may be

macro economic

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crises that

influenced

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on

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family

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budget

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and standard of living.

This

decreasing revenue contributes people to

commit

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crime

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crimes

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for their living costs and even just

surviving

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expenses. A third factor is that

parents

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care for their children

is

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may

decreasing

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continuously and

this

may lead to more children

attend

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a little

crime

, especially in poor countries. The

times

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recently reported that

the

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most criminals

are

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not

received

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adequate favor

by

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their

parents

and

care-taker

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. Turning to possible solutions, there should be more CCTV cameras and policies in the streets, and these have

effect

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on some thefts and robberies people commit. A second remedy is that

Education

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minister should add study programs about violence and vandalism in primary

school

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. If

such

courses were more available, it would reduce the

crime

action to some extent.

Finally

,

parents

should increase their child-care and use some GPS technology that reveals children to avoid doing truancy. In conclusion, the factors of

luck

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lack

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of

education

, economic turmoil and

parents

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parents'

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care appear to be

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the

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main causes. More detection

camera

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, curriculum and modern technology would lessen the severity of the situation.