With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered and some are even facing extinction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What can be done to protect animal?

These days, when human life is facing climate change, global warming,

disappearence

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disappearance

of some animal species, scientists have been calling all people to save Earth and the living

environment

.

However

, some people seemly ignore these problems. In my opinion, I do agree that saving

creatures

is essential and there are many different ways to be taken immediately.

Firstly

, it is a fact that animal species should be preserved because they are a part of biodiversity and nature.

Human

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need an ecosystem and a healthy living

environment

which

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has been established from plants and

creatures

. An ecosystem supplies humans with food, fresh water and air, raw materials.

For example

,

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forests

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and

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oceans

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absorb greenhouse gas, plants reduce

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, floods and droughts.

Moreover

,

creatures

living in the forests are responsible for the development of their habitats.

For instance

,

mamals

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mammals

and birds would disperse seeds around the forest. It is terrible that extinction or reduction of some species would affect significantly

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an ecosystems

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ecosystems

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.

Additionally

, preservation

creatures

and their habitats need to acquire fast due to the human living

environment

by many different methods.

Firstly

, the more population growth rate is rising the more the influence of human causes natural

environment

, so

this

rate should be reduced along with wasted food.

Secondly

, the governments should give production standards for clearing plants to get wood as well as they

also

punish if anyone overcome the limitation.

Thirdly

, one of the best

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to protect animals is that consumers should not buy products made from animals and change their eating habits to be

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vegeterian

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vegetarian

. In conclusion, it is certainly adequate that

creatures

are more important than some people think. It is predicted that governments , communities, companies have been aware of

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animal preservation and the ecosystem and

finally

taken more ways effectively.