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The best way to protect the environment is to use local resource, such as food or building materials rather than transporting resources from other places. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#environment #resource #food #materials #resources #places
In the
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globalisation era
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,
environment
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environmental
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 problems are increased at an alarming rate.
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, it is believed by a cluster of
like minded
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 people that the most effective method to protect
environment
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the environment
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by
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is by
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 using local resources as compared to transport from overseas.My conviction forces me to be
a
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partially
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accord
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 with
this
 ideology and will cast light on its reasons in
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 specified way.
Initating
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Initiating
 with the rationalization of several favourable aspects for
this
phenomenan
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phenomenon
. The plausible contributing factor is that Decreased
air
 travelling.
A plenty
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 of food products and
contructing
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constructing
construction
 materials have been acquiring from other nations through planes,resulting these emit unwanted toxic gases and
realeses
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releases
 it into the
air
 which triggers off degrading ambience.
Hence
,if people are using local resources
then
 it would
leads
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 to
reduce
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in
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in-air
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air
 travelling which
assist
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 to protect
environment
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the environment
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.To epitome, Himalaya mountain was 200 Km away from
jalandhar
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, but it had witnessed from there in lockdown owing to contagious disease COVID-19 that halt on
air
 travelling so it helps to protect
environment
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the environment
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.
However
, there are some other ways to protect
environment
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the environment
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 and the glaring one is that growing trees.
The
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 ample number of trees can be grown in metropolitan and countryside areas which not only mitigate lack of oxygen problems
,
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but
also
 spread
greenry
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greenery
 to ameliorate the degradation of
environment
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the environment
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.
In addition
,considering as the industries.Meanwhile,the
distict
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distinct
district
 kind of raw materials has been used in manufacturing processes
whic
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which
 has resulted to poses a serious threat to
enviroment
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environment
 so
government
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the government
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 need to set limits on using these items which will
also
 alleviate the deterioration of ambience. In conclusion, it is precise that
although
decrease
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a decrease
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 in
transporting
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 is attributed to
protect
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environment
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the environment
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,
but
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it should not be forgotten that
plantation
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 as well as imposing restrictions on raw
material
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materials
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 may
also
 save
environment
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the environment
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.
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