The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.
The pie charts show the difference between France and Australia
on
Change preposition
in
production
of electricity in 1980 and 2000.
In Australia in 1980, the production of Coal was the highest Add an article
the production
for
50 Change preposition
at
units
Use synonyms
while
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Oil
was the lowest Use synonyms
for
10 Change preposition
at
units
. Hydro Use synonyms
Power
and Natural Gas are the same for 20 Use synonyms
units
. Coal remained at top production in 2000 for 130 Use synonyms
units
whilst Use synonyms
Oil
and Natural gas Use synonyms
were
2 Change the verb form
was
units
. Hydro Use synonyms
Power
was relatively high for 36 Use synonyms
units
.
Nuclear Use synonyms
Power
in France in 1980 was 15 Use synonyms
units
and it significantly reached 126 Use synonyms
units
in 2000. The consumption of Use synonyms
Oil
and Natural Gas in 1980 Use synonyms
were
the same Change the verb form
was
as
25 Change preposition
at
units
but in 2000, Use synonyms
data
Correct article usage
the data
of
Coal was the same with Change preposition
on
Oil
Use synonyms
for
25 Change preposition
at
units
. Data of Hydro Use synonyms
Power
and Natural Use synonyms
Power
fell.
The total unit Use synonyms
of
Australia in 1980 and 2000 was 100 and 170 Change preposition
in
units
and in France was 90 and 180 Use synonyms
units
.Use synonyms
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