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In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, people prefer to use media for
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 rather than
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 forms. In my opinion,
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 a vast majority of people prefer
video
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 and images over written form, the written form of
communication
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 has not lost its place.
Due to
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 the advancement of science and technology, it is more convenient for everyone, especially ordinary society, to take pictures, make videos and share them on the web.
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, the interest in
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 way of transmission
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 not
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 to the contemporary period. First of all,it is not necessary to be educated to understand an
image
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 or a
video
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,
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as a result
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, books with pictures in them have always been popular among children and adults.
In addition
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, learning and using written language requires determination and
acquiring
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 knowledge.
On the contrary
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, especially these days, capturing and sharing an
image
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 does not require special knowledge.
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usually, a
picture
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 or
video
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 depicts more details than a comment or short text.
On the other hand
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, to communicate officially and legally,
folk
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 have to be familiar with a written form of
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.
For example
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, to file a petition to the judiciary, the written word is the only way.
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, a long text compared to a
picture
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 or even a
video
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 provides a plethora of details. Neither a movie nor a
picture
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 can compete against a novel,
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 as “War and Peace”, in terms of conveying concepts and emotions. In conclusion,
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image
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, namely photographs, film or pictures, is becoming prevalent as a means of
communication
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 in modern society, mainly because it is easy to understand, and
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 does not need dedicated knowledge to comprehend the
picture
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. The written word still has particular importance in supporting the efficiency of using the
image
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 and can not be abandoned.

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task response
State your view clearly in the intro and keep it in the end.
coherence
Use simple links to connect ideas. For example: and, but, also, however, for example.
structure
Make one idea per paragraph. Start with a topic sentence and end with a short fact.
content
Clear stance on the topic.
structure
Good overall flow with intro, body and conclusion.
ideas
Some good ideas about image and writing.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Visual communication
  • Emotional impact
  • Transcend language barriers
  • Universality
  • Infographic
  • Memory retention
  • Misinterpretation
  • Manipulation
  • Complementary
  • Evocative
  • Multimedia
  • Contextual understanding
  • Ambiguity
  • Visual literacy
  • Instant communication
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