Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban area. The advantage outweigh the disadvantage?
With the industrial revolution, the number of
companies
and industries
keep on growing in cities
. Some feel that if these organizations shift to regional areas
then
there can be more area for the development of regional areas
. This
essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this
concern.
On one hand, with more and more companies
being established in urban areas
, people are migrating from small towns to cities
in search of employment. As a result
of this
, the cities
are getting crowded day by day and pollution levels are increasing. If the government is able to shift some companies
and industries
to rural areas
, then
the migrations to cities
will stop and people will find employment in their regions. Moreover
, this
transformation even helps in the expansion and development of regional areas
.
On the other hand
, there is a rising concern that these industries
and companies
may take away the essence of the regional areas
. When we establish industries
in these areas
, the waste from these industries
pollutes the land and water of the regional areas
. In most villages the main occupation of people would be agriculture, with pollution levels rising, it adversely affects the vegetation from the crops. Furthermore
, with the continuous emission of harmful materials from industries
, the land here becomes damp and cannot be used for farming in coming generations.
To conclude, even though there are advantages of establishing industries
in villages, the disadvantages outweigh the advantages as pollution levels keep rising in the regional areas
. So this
migration of industries
to rural areas
should not happen.Submitted by yojitha.kurupath on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite