Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?

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contemporary times, inequality soaring around the globe in terms of education,

food

, availability and health.Many people believe it is the responsibility of their government to resolve their domestic

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for their citizens.

In addition

,some argue that developed

countries

should give these

nations

a hand of help.

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the efforts of the government to find solutions to overcome their national crises and in the

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,half

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essay will shed some light on the role of developed

nations

in fighting global hunger and uneducation. Many underdeveloped

nations

faced scarcity of basic facilities

such

as

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clean drinking water, educational infrastructure, healthy

food

. some times

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problem occurred because of their natural geographical conditions ,

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remote villages in Africa region. But, some it is due to poor policies of their government, corruption and other man-made disasters. These situations can be undone by their own officials by making some crucial changes in their economical policies, rules and regulations.

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, before 1991, India was totally dependent on foreign loans to run its economy. Several times, I.M.F gave a short period loan to India for initial survival. After 1991, when India open their market for private industry and allowed foreign direct investment

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drastic growth had been registered in the market.

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,some parts of the world required serious help from the world. They do not have proper infrastructure due to a week economy and have

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limited sources of natural resources to do international trade. these

countries

always depend on United Nation's support for their survival. Especially, several African

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are still far-far away from 21st-century growth and struggled heavily to fulfil their basic requirements,

such

as education,

food

and water. they have to walk more

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-50 kilometres daily to bring drinking water from other places.

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,climate does not support them either, their land is not fertile for agriculture so that they mostly depend on hunting for their

food

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developed

countries

are helping them by providing them

food

and education through various N.G.O but these measures are not enough still more things need to do to uplift them from poverty and illiteracy. In conclusion, wealthy

nations

should help poor

countries

who really suffering from nature and other factors and

on the other hand

, the underdeveloped

nations

should correct themselves by their own efforts by correcting their

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policies and other domestic issues.