Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?
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food
, availability and health.Many people believe it is the responsibility of their government to resolve their domestic Use synonyms
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in fighting global hunger and uneducation.
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remote villages in Africa region. But, some it is due to poor policies of their government, corruption and other man-made disasters. These situations can be undone by their own officials by making some crucial changes in their economical policies, rules and regulations. Correct article usage
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For example
, before 1991, India was totally dependent on foreign loans to run its economy. Several times, I.M.F gave a short period loan to India for initial survival. After 1991, when India open their market for private industry and allowed foreign direct investment Linking Words
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drastic growth had been registered in the market.
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,some parts of the world required serious help from the world. They do not have proper infrastructure due to a week economy and have Linking Words
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always depend on United Nation's support for their survival. Especially, several African Use synonyms
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are still far-far away from 21st-century growth and struggled heavily to fulfil their basic requirements,Change to a plural noun
regions
such
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food
and water. they have to walk more Use synonyms
40
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and education through various N.G.O but these measures are not enough still more things need to do to uplift them from poverty and illiteracy.
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who really suffering from nature and other factors and Use synonyms
on the other hand
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policies and other domestic issues.Replace the word
national
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