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Exposure to international media, such as films, TV and magazines, has an impact on the local culture. What do you think of these impacts? Do you think that the advantages of these impacts outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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THE PACE AT WHICH
WORLD
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THE WORLD
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 IS BEING BROUGHT CLOSER IS INCREASING EXPONENTIALLY. WITH
ADVENT
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THE ADVENT
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 OF
INTERNET
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THE INTERNET
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, ANY
MEDIA
 PRODUCED IN ANY PART OF THE WORLD IS, FOR ALL PRACTICAL PURPOSES, AVAILABLE GLOBALLY.
THIS
 HAS
IT'S
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ITS
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 OWN BENEFITS. AWARENESS OF VARIOUS
CULTURES
, WHICH
OTHERWISE
 WOULD HAVE REMAINED UNKNOWN TO
MAJORITY
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THE MAJORITY
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 OF THE
PEOPLE
, IS INCREASING.
THIS
ALSO
 HAS ALLOWED FOR
FUSION
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THE FUSION
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 OF IDEAS AND KNOWLEDGE WHICH HAS NOT ONLY ACCELERATED THE TECHNOLOGICAL ADVANCEMENT HUMAN SPECIES OVERALL
,
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 BUT
ALSO
 HAS MADE
PEOPLE
 MORE
BROAD MINDED
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BROAD-MINDED
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. INDIVIDUAL
CULTURES
 TRY TO PICK UP BEST PRACTICES FROM OTHER
CULTURES
. ONE
SUCH
 EXAMPLE OF BEST PRACTICE SHARED BY INDIA GLOBALLY IS
USE
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THE USE
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 OF YOGA TO MAINTAIN MENTAL HEALTH.
ALTHOUGH
,
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 YOGA IS BEING PRACTICED IN INDIA FOR CENTURIES, NOT MANY
PEOPLE
 KNEW ABOUT IT UNTIL ACCESS TO
INDERTNATIONAL
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INTERNATIONAL
MEDIA
 WAS MADE EASIER. SINCE
THEN
 MILLIONS OF
PEOPLE
 GLOBALLY HAVE BENEFITTED FROM
USE
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THE USE
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 OF YOGA.
HOWEVER
, THERE IS A FLIP SIDE TO IT. WITH IDEAS AVAILABLE ACROSS CONTINENTS AND BOUNDARIES,
UNIQUENESS
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THE UNIQUENESS
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 OF INDIVIDUAL
CULTURES
 IS BEING LOST. ONE
SUCH
 CULTURAL ASPECT THAT, IN MY VIEW, HAS BEEN IMPACTED ADVERSELY THE MOST IS CLOTHING. HISTORICALLY, NONE OF THE ASIAN
CULTURES
 USED
SHIRT
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SHIRTS
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 AND TROUSERS IN THEIR ATTIRE. NOW,
SHIRT
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SHIRTS
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 AND TROUSERS HAVE ALMOST BECOME A GLOBAL ATTIRE FOR MEN. HAVING CONSIDERED BOTH ASPECTS, I BELIEVE, THAT FOR
GREATER
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THE GREATER
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 GOOD, KNOWLEDGE AND IDEAS SHOULD NOT BE RESTRICTED AND SHOULD BE ALLOWED TO FLOW FREELY.
THIS
 HAS LEAD TO GREAT TECHNOLOGICAL
ADANCEMENTS
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ADVANCEMENTS
ADVANCEMENT
 AND SOCIAL AWARENESS GLOBALLY. MANY ARGUE THAT
JOURNEY
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THE JOURNEY
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 OF BANGALORE BECOMING SILICON VALLEY OF INDIA HAS BEEN INSPIRED BY ITS COUNTERPART IN
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UNITED
UNSITED
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THE UNSITED
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 STATES OF AMERICA. INTERNATIONAL
MEDIA
 HAS PLAYED A BIG PART IN INSPIRING MANY
ENTERPRENEURS
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ENTREPRENEURS
 IN BANGALORE. TO CONCLUDE, I BELIEVE, THAT BENEFITS OF INTERNATIONAL
MEDIA
 BEING AVAILABLE GLOBALLY OUTWEIGH ITS DISADVANTAGES.
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