More and more people use private cars instead of taking the public transport. what are the reasons for this rising Trend ? what can be done to encourage people to use public transport?

In modern society, the mode of individual use of
cars
are
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increasing. at the same
time
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people
lost their trust
on
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public
vehicles
. in
this
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I will explain the major causes of the statement and some of the
provision
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for improving public
transportation
.
To begin
, rising population creates
increasing
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number
of
vehicles
because it helps to meet the needs of
people
. admittedly now everyone can buy private
cars
with
installment
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payment.
this
is more convenient and less expensive for a
middle class
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family to
fulfill
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their dreams
on
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travelling. while doing professional
jobs
, young generation
travel
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a lot for meeting their task. so using
personal
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car is more convenient and adaptable for employees to make their career development. to illustrate
this
, in
UK
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some areas of
jobs
need
driving
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licence and personal mode of travelling especially like social work professionals and marketing
jobs
.
however
, if the applicant cannot meet
this
provision, they will not get any
jobs
related to
this
field. Apparently,
increasing
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number
of
vehicles
create pollution, audience and traffic difficulties in our society. government should implement more accurate policies for
public
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the public
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transportation
system.
firstly
, they have to introduce more
vehicles
according to the needs of
people
.
secondly
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it should be generated through low travelling payment, more seats for
disabled
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person or elderly
people
.
Thirdly
, all these arrangements need to follow punctuality and good customer service.
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, in 2011 Central Government conducted a survey related to the increasing
number
of
cars
. reportedly, study findings suggested that
people
working in night time mostly by private vehicle because
majority
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of them not satisfied with the service of public
transportation
during their work hours. In conclusion, there is a saying a bird without wings,
similarly
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people
cannot live without any mode of modern
transportation
because we are
depended
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upon them. but
increasing
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an increasing
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number
of
cars
result
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various environmental problems so government should ensure more reliable public transportations.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Convenience
  • Flexibility
  • Direct travel
  • Schedules
  • Routes
  • Comfort
  • Privacy
  • Personal space
  • Perceived safety
  • Health concerns
  • Public transport systems
  • Reliability
  • Frequency
  • Infrastructure
  • Accessible
  • Environmental awareness
  • Incentives
  • Lower fares
  • Tax benefits
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