More and more people use private cars instead of taking the public transport. what are the reasons for this rising Trend ? what can be done to encourage people to use public transport?
In modern society, the mode of individual use of
cars
are
increasing. at the same Change the verb form
is
time
Add a comma
,time
people
lost their trust on
public Change preposition
in
vehicles
. in this
essay
I will explain the major causes of the statement and some of the Add a comma
,essay
provision
for improving public Fix the agreement mistake
provisions
transportation
.
To begin
, rising population creates increasing
Add an article
an increasing
number
of vehicles
because it helps to meet the needs of people
. admittedly now everyone can buy private cars
with installment
payment. Change the spelling
instalment
this
is more convenient and less expensive for a middle class
family to Add a hyphen
middle-class
fulfill
their dreams Change the spelling
fulfil
on
travelling. while doing professional Change preposition
of
jobs
, young generation travel
a lot for meeting their task. so using Change the verb form
travels
personal
car is more convenient and adaptable for employees to make their career development. to illustrate Add an article
a personal
the personal
this
, in UK
some areas of Correct article usage
the UK
jobs
need driving
licence and personal mode of travelling especially like social work professionals and marketing Add an article
a driving
jobs
. however
, if the applicant cannot meet this
provision, they will not get any jobs
related to this
field.
Apparently, increasing
Correct article usage
the increasing
number
of vehicles
create pollution, audience and traffic difficulties in our society. government should implement more accurate policies for public
Add an article
the public
transportation
system. firstly
, they have to introduce more vehicles
according to the needs of people
. secondly
it should be generated through low travelling payment, more seats for Add a comma
,secondly
disabled
person or elderly Add an article
a disabled
people
.
Thirdly
, all these arrangements need to follow punctuality and good customer service. for example
, in 2011 Central Government conducted a survey related to the increasing number
of cars
. reportedly, study findings suggested that people
working in night time mostly by private vehicle because majority
of them not satisfied with the service of public Add an article
the majority
a majority
transportation
during their work hours.
In conclusion, there is a saying a bird without wings, similarly
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,similarly
people
cannot live without any mode of modern transportation
because we are depended
upon them. but Replace the word
dependent
increasing
Add an article
an increasing
the increasing
number
of cars
result
various environmental problems so government should ensure more reliable public transportations.Add the preposition
inresult
fromresult
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