Many people today are worried about ‘cybercrime’ such as hacking and identity theft. What problems does ‘cybercrime’ cause, and what solutions can you suggest for ordinary people and businesses to take?

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There is no doubt, that the

number

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of cybercrimes has been constantly rising over

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the

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decade. The most obvious reason for

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phenomenon is a severe deficiency of secure software in comparison with

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amount of malicious programs. In

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I would like to discuss some outcomes and solutions for

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issue.

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with, while IT-

spesialists

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specialists

unsuccessfully

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attempt

to catch up

hackers

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, ordinary users

scarely

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scarcely

securely

take benefits from existing software due to IT-illiteracy. Individuals browse suspicious

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and receive unsolicited messages without realizing probable consequences.

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, they provide hackers with

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acces

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access

to personal

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such

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as name, bank account

number

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or even chattings.

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, victims of cybercrimes often face

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psychological

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such

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as cyber

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bullying

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or exploitation. As for corporations, the main reason for being endangered is an increased

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of persons with

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acces

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access

to corporation's

data

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. Particularly, each corporation with remote branches has to use

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servers, and each computer with an authorized

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access

can be crashed.

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, a remarkable

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amount

data

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theft

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occurs due to improper usage of official gadgets. Overall, some steps

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should

be implemented in order to manage more relevant security politics.

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goverments

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governments

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should shift theirs focuses onto

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legal

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framework

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in cyberspace.Some kind of management authority in

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also

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might be created. Clear terms of investigations and

conprehensible

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comprehensible

comprehensive

punishment politics would trigger a

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substantial

decline in cybercrime. Another

one

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apply

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measure would be reinforcing

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apply

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privacy

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politics among corporations.

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, each employee who receives

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access to

corporation's

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a corporation's

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data

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should be scrupulously testified in

cyber security

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cybersecurity

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knowledge and skills.

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, a prohibition

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use official gadgets for personal purposes might

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reduce

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number

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of random

data

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thefts. To conclude, I would say, that despite various causes for cybercrime,

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measures, as creating

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privacy

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a privacy

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policy and reconsideration of

privacy

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rules for users, might be highly effective in both categories.

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Introduction
Body paragraph 1 – Problems
Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
Conclusion

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Another problem that needs to be considered...
A possible solution to this problem would be...
One immediate practical solution is to...

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

315 words

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Many people today are worried about ‘cybercrime’ such as hacking and identity theft. What problems does ‘cybercrime’ cause, and what solutions can you suggest for ordinary people and businesses to take?

Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

As smoking is banned at public places , some people say that this rule should also be imposed on mobile phones. What extent do you agree or disagree.

Some people think that outdoor activities are more beneficial for children's development than playing computer games. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination,while other think that tere are more important factors such as money and appearance.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Tourism is a modern form of colonialism. It distorts local economies, causes environmental damage, ruins the places it exploits. To what extent do you agree?