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Many people today are worried about ‘cybercrime’ such as hacking and identity theft. What problems does ‘cybercrime’ cause, and what solutions can you suggest for ordinary people and businesses to take?

#people #‘cybercrime’ #identity #theft #businesses
There is no doubt, that the
number
 of cybercrimes has been constantly rising over the
last
 decade. The most obvious reason for
this
 phenomenon is
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 deficiency of secure software in comparison with malicious soft. In
this
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 I would like to discuss some outcomes and solutions for
this
 issue.
To begin
 with, while
IT-specialists
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 unsuccessfully
atepmt
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attempt
 to catch up
hackers
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with hackers
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, ordinary users
scarely
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scarcely
securely
 take benefits from existing software due to
IT-illiteracy
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. Individuals browse suspicious
web-sites
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 and receive unsolicited messages without realizing probable consequences.
As a result
, they provide hackers with
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acces
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access
 to personal
data
,
such
 as name, bank account
number
 or even chattings.
Moreover
, victims of cybercrimes often face
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psychological
abusement
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,
such
 as cyber
bulling
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bullying
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 or exploitation. As for corporations, the main reason for being endangered is an increased
number
 of persons with
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acces
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access
 to corporation's
data
. Particularly, each corporation with remote branches has to use
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 servers, and each computer with an authorized
acces
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access
 can be crashed.
Finally
, a remarkable
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amount
 of
data
thefs
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theft
thefts
 occurs due to improper usage of official gadgets. Overall, some steps
shoud
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should
 be implemented in order to manage more relevant security politics.
Firstly
,
goverments
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governments
government
 should shift theirs focuses onto
development
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 of
legal
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a legal
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framework
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 in cyberspace.Some kind of management authority in
privacy
also
 might be created. Clear terms of investigations and
conprehensible
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comprehensible
comprehensive
 punishment politics would trigger a
sustaintial
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substantial
 decline in cybercrime. Another
one
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measure would be reinforcing
of
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privacy
 politics among corporations.
For instance
, each employee who receives
an
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access to
corporation's
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a corporation's
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data
 should be scrupulously testified in
cyber security
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 knowledge and skills.
In addition
, a prohibition
ro
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to
 use official gadgets for personal purposes might
also
 reduce
a
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number
 of random
data
 thefts. To conclude, I would say, that despite various causes for cybercrime,
such
 measures, as creating
privacy
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 policy and reconsideration of
privacy
 rules for users, might be highly effective in both categories.
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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.

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  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • One of the first problems of the...
  • Another problem that needs to be considered...
  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
  • One immediate practical solution is to...

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