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Child obesity is an increasing problem in Australia. As many as two third of the children are obese. School have responsibility to monitor what their students are eating and amount of their exercise. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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Health means physical and mental well being and it is one of the crucial development of
children
.But
now a days
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 majority of
school
students
 are obese. I completely agree with the notion that schools have
there
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their
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own
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 responsibility to mobilise healthy habits, which will be addressed in the following paragraphs
Moreover
, modern advertisement and food chain companies
are always encourages
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are always encouraged
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 unhealthy eating habits in spite of its consequence.
As a result
, it brings overweight and related
healthy
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 problems among kids .
On the other hand
, schools and other educational settings need to identify what kind of food
intakes
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 are follow by their
students
 because education generates
healthy
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a healthy
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 lifestyle among people.
Although
,
children
 need a proper amount of protein and minerals for their brain development to achieve their learning
task
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. To illustrate
this
,
government
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 of India introduced
mid day
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 meal programs for
school
students
 under 14 years old .Admittedly,
adapting
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adopting
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 good eating habits and circulating
protein enriched
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protein-enriched
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 meals
are
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 the motto of
this
programs
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. Apparently, teachers play an important role in the socialization of
children
.
In addition
 to
this
, they can make awareness among parents through PTA programs (parents teachers association) in
school
 settings.
Furthermore
, introducing calory list, physical exercise ,yoga practice, community voluntary works and sports facilities
provides
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 more inspiration of healthy eating
amongs
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amongst
among
school
students
.
For example
, in
Japan
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 every minor
students
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student
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 should follow cleaning, meals distribution and cooking in their
school
 settings ,for creating them more responsible and healthier. In
conclusion
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 health is the wealth of man whereas every
children
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child
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 need a healthy body d and mines so social institution like schools will amba more convenient and creative ideas for
healthy
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a healthy
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 lifestyle
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