Some people think that newspapers are the best way to get news.However,others believe that they can get news better through another media

Some
people
assume that
newspaper
is the best way for getting
news
,while others think that there are many other best ways to get the
news
. On the one hand,there are some reasons why
people
say that
newspaper
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is the best source to get
news
.
Firstly
,mostly older
people
are habitual of reading
news
from
newspaper
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,
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because they do not feel
statisfied
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satisfied
with other sources of getting
news
and
also
they like to spend their leisure time on reading
newspaper
.
Secondly
,most of the
news
in
newspaper
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are accurate because before writing the
news
,they check all
news
very carefully and
also
all journalists who find
news
for
newspaper
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are professionals.
For example
,I have seen
many
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news
on my mobiles which are totally fake,because they post their
news
only for publicity in the media.
On the other hand
,there are
also
another two ways to get the
news
.
First
of all,both
internet
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and television are
better
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way
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to get
news
,because
people
can easily search
any
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news
in
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everywhere and anytime on their mobile and ever they can watch
news
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on the television easily
,
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because all of the
news
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are authorised and professional with
this
.They stay up
to
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late
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date
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about any
news
.
Moreover
,
people
can
also
get video and audio of every
news
,because these are available on
internet
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and television as well. In conclusion,according to me,both ways of getting
news
is better,but it depends upon
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choice in which way they feel comfortable,and
people
must be aware
about
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fake
news
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • news coverage
  • perspectives
  • opinions
  • accessed
  • interactive
  • engaging
  • real-time
  • multimedia
  • combination
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