Nowadays people are encouraged to buy more and more consumer products. Some people think it is good for the economy. However, others think it does great harm to the society as a whole. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

At present days, the public in some nations

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motivated to purchase

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, which has aroused a discussion between different groups of

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. While encouraging to buying

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is beneficial to a nation's

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, it is certainly detrimental to social development when

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make unnecessary purchases. It certainly enhances the development of

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economy

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when a greater number of

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are willing to consume. The growth of

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a number

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of consumers means greater consumer demand, which definitely contributes to the development of some businesses.

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Games, there is a noticeable rise in the need

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sports

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and facilities. Companies which specialize in

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field receive more orders during

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time, thereby making greater profit during

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time.

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, more job opportunities are created since more workers are needed to manufacture adequate

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to meet the need of customers.

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, if more money is spent on items that are more than what

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really need, the consequences can be detrimental to

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society.

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behavior

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can result in waste. These

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are not always necessary or satisfactory, which means they are very likely to be left untouched or even thrown away. It is not rare to see a seemingly fabulous coat that was bought on impulse stay in the closet without being put on again.

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, encouraging

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to buy more and more

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is not helpful for

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to form a positive attitude toward consumption. When they are used to

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a style of consuming, they may become addicted to buying

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without thinking carefully about whether they really need those

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or not. Nowadays, a number of young adults are keen on buying flashy

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,

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as cutting-edged laptops, brand new cellphones, etc, some of which,

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,

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too pricey for them to afford.

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, some of them choose to pay by credit card, ignoring the potential danger of

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kind of payment. In conclusion, while it is true that consumption is an integral part of a nation's

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and encouraging

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to buy

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can boost the

economy

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to a certain extent,

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encouragement does harm to

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society when

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don't base their purchases on their real demand and purchasing power.