Employer sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Employers asking for your personal
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has been a norm these days but people seem to land on different sides on how they feel about lending your personal details to someone.
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essay discusses both views and states the Authors opinion. From the
employer
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's view, finding out as much relevant
information
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as they can about the job
applicant
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can help them find out if he/she is a good fit for the current
position
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.
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, knowing more about the activities that an
applicant
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might have interest in during the free time, like sports. depending on the type of the activity or the sport, like a team sport or individual sport will give more relevant
information
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than could potentially match with the qualities required for the
position
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.
on the other hand
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, knowing single or married can
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help the
employer
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about the stage of the
applicant
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career. people who do not have a lot of responsibilities that come with being married tend to try out different careers before settling down in a particular path they want to pursue.
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some
information
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might be relevant, an increasing amount of data breaches recently inside different tech compies has caused several unemployed candidates to be reluctant about providing more
information
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than what is required for the job.
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, Data can be misused by the employees currently working for the company by selling new
applicant
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's
information
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. Meanwhile, Increasing differences in personal and political views among pupils can cause the employees who are part of the organization can discriminate and potentially negatively affect the
applicant
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chances of acquiring the
position
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. Having looked at both views, providing little more than relevant
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could positively impact the
applicant
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's chances at landing the
position
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.
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will give an
employer
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a general idea of how the person applying for the
position
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may be fit into the culture of the company and can work with peers. These observations can
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positively impact the
applicant
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to avoid a workplace that he might not be a great fit for his career goals. Even though there are negatives, they do not outweigh the positives in providing personal
information
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to the
employer
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.
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