In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is more important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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people

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believe that owning a

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is rather very important than renting

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. In

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societies, having ownership of a

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by building it or purchasing is considered to be of more significance for someone’s life when some

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are concerned. In

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essay, the contrast between

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and cons of owning a

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, will be discussed in detail and compared to reach a conclusion.

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and foremost, the discussion will be on the positive

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or the advantages of owning a

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. When

one

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has a

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that belongs to him, he is considered to be leading a life with

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and

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.

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is probably because someone does not have to worry about paying

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rent on time, and even though he has lost his earning, he can lay down in his

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and close his eyes, knowing that no

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is going to pull him out for not paying the rent.

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, having ownership of the

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brings someone freedom to change the ways it looks and the possibility of doing whatever the modifications he intends to do to his

home

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the country. As the saying goes by, for many

people

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,

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is not just a

place

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but

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is a feeling too. It may be

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a feeling

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of

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freedom or

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dignity

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or

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self contentment

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. Apart from that, it can be understood from

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history

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, that

people

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have struggled to own the

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they lived. To exemplify, in the ordinary world’s perspective, a tenant, requiring

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more

comfort

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, may not be able to modify his rent

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without

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consent,

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, even though he does modifications or at least painting, despite the fact that he rents the

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, it is not certain that he may experience the

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so long, due to that fact that the landlord, giving notices in advance, can have the building unoccupied at any time as he wishes.

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, to illustrate, it is clear that, owning a

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has significant benefits or positive situations

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when it comes to

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, safety,

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, freedom and satisfaction.

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, owning a

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may have its own disadvantages too, when thought about the impermanent nature of the world. In reality, to own a

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, it takes someone’ untiring effort and

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money for a

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life time

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, but it may take only a few minutes to be destroyed by a natural disaster or a fire caused due to a careless act. Not only that, many

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end up frustrated and stressed by

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loans taken to own a

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as well as protecting it from possible dangers

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as theft.

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, as far as the above

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are considered, some disadvantages could

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be found in owning a

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, though there are certain ups and downs in owning a

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, the advantages seem to be stronger

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than

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that

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the disadvantages. So, it is understood that

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having the ownership of a

home

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is more important when certain

factors

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such

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as

dignity

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, safety,

comfort

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and satisfaction are considered. It is

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concluded that

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owning a

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is more

advantages

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or to have more positive circumstances, than that

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renting

one

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.