In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is more important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

There are countries in which most

of

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the

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people

believe that owning a

houses

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is rather very important than renting

one

. In

such

societies, having ownership of a

house

by building it or purchasing is considered to be of more significance for someone’s life when some

factors

are concerned. In

this

essay, the contrast between

pros

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and cons of owning a

house

, will be discussed in detail and compared to reach a conclusion.

First

and foremost, the discussion will be on the positive

factors

or the advantages of owning a

house

. When

one

has a

place

that belongs to him, he is considered to be leading a life with

dignity

and

safe

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.

This

is probably because someone does not have to worry about paying

a

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rent on time, and even though he has lost his earning, he can lay down in his

home

and close his eyes, knowing that no

one

is going to pull him out for not paying the rent.

Furthermore

, having ownership of the

home

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brings someone freedom to change the ways it looks and the possibility of doing whatever the modifications he intends to do to his

home

, as far as the changes comply with the governing building codes in the area

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the country. As the saying goes by, for many

people

,

home

is not just a

place

but

it

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is a feeling too. It may be

feeling

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a feeling

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of

the

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freedom or

the

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dignity

or

the

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self contentment

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. Apart from that, it can be understood from

the

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history

also

, that

people

have struggled to own the

place

they lived. To exemplify, in the ordinary world’s perspective, a tenant, requiring

to

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more

comfort

, may not be able to modify his rent

home

without

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consent,

also

, even though he does modifications or at least painting, despite the fact that he rents the

place

, it is not certain that he may experience the

comfort

so long, due to that fact that the landlord, giving notices in advance, can have the building unoccupied at any time as he wishes.

Therefore

, to illustrate, it is clear that, owning a

home

has significant benefits or positive situations

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when it comes to

comfort

, safety,

dignity

, freedom and satisfaction.

Secondly

, owning a

home

may have its own disadvantages too, when thought about the impermanent nature of the world. In reality, to own a

house

, it takes someone’ untiring effort and

hard earned

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money for a

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life time

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, but it may take only a few minutes to be destroyed by a natural disaster or a fire caused due to a careless act. Not only that, many

people

end up frustrated and stressed by

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loans taken to own a

house

as well as protecting it from possible dangers

such

as theft.

Therefore

, as far as the above

factors

are considered, some disadvantages could

also

be found in owning a

home

. To

summaries

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, though there are certain ups and downs in owning a

house

, the advantages seem to be stronger

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that

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than

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the disadvantages. So, it is understood that

,

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having the ownership of a

home

is more important when certain

factors

such

as

dignity

, safety,

comfort

and satisfaction are considered. It is

therefore

concluded that

,

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owning a

home

is more

advantages

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or to have more positive circumstances, than that

of

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renting

one

.