Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has been suggested that the topic for discussion, the

environment

can'

t

be developed or prevented by

individuals

, in ,add

this

process is able to be enforced only governments and large

companies

. I don'

t

admit that

individuals

can'

t

affect the

environment

and there are some reasons.

First

of all, as a matter of fact, in

this

day and ,age negative effects are being increased by

people

so there are some issues about the

environment

as pollution of the air, seas, lakes, in ,add the decreasing of the oxygen. In fact, the rules had been illustrated in the legislation, what is more measures had tried to enforce by the

companies

,

,

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the statistic shows that

this

isn'

t

enough. I believe that

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everything commences from

individuals

,because those who manage the government,

companies

are

individuals

of society. As a

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if the

environment

is defended by the public, they needn'

t

have rules, fines, protective measures and so on. Briefly, my own view on

this

matter,

individuals

have got the bigger role than the government or

companies

, most of

people

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need have to get information about

this

topic as some

people

don'

t

understand own obligations, duties and others.

Secondly

, another factor

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protective measures of the government or

companies

aren'

t

permanent, because they can'

t

watch out every place so the enactments should be realized by the individual. As an example, they mustn'

t

pollute areas, sowing new trees, not throw rubbish and so on. To sum up,

people

mustn'

t

think that the country or massive

companies

have got special roles for the

environment

and they have to remember each person is

the

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member of the public,

environment

and they don'

t

prevent

this

process will affect both

people

's health and surroundings.