Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has been suggested that the topic for discussion, the

environment

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can'

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be developed or prevented by

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,

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this

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process is able to be enforced only governments and large

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. I don'

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admit that

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affect

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the

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and there are some reasons.

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of all, as a matter of fact, in

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day and

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negative effects are being increased by

people

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so there are some issues about the

environment

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as pollution of the air, seas, lakes,

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the decreasing of the oxygen. In fact, the rules had been illustrated in the legislation, what is more measures had tried to enforce by the

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the statistic shows that

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enough. I believe that

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everything commences from

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,because those who manage the government,

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are

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of society. As a

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if the

environment

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is defended by the public, they needn'

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have rules, fines, protective measures and so on. Briefly, my own view on

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matter,

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have got the bigger role than the government or

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, most of

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people

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need have to get information about

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topic as some

people

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don'

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understand own obligations, duties and others.

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, another factor

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protective measures of the government or

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aren'

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permanent, because they can'

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watch out every place so the enactments should be realized by the individual. As an example, they mustn'

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pollute areas, sowing new trees, not throw rubbish and so on. To sum up,

people

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mustn'

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think that the country or massive

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have got special roles for the

environment

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and they have to remember each person is

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member of the public,

environment

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and they don'

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prevent

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process will affect both

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's health and surroundings.