People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems? Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?

It has been suggested that the topic for discussion,

people

inhabit in large cities so there are more issues

everyday

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.

Others

argue that

people

should be encouraged by the government

moving

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to move

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to

rurals

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rural

and

others

.

First

of all, as a matter of

fact

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there are some

disdavantages

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disadvantages

or negative points in

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city life. As a pattern more foods, markets,

shopings

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shopping

shops

shoppings

are

overcost

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overcast

over cost

, on top of

that

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there is pollution, throwing rubbish around, lacking

of

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the oxygen than regional towns. I believe strongly, the problems establish from various reasons like without employment, the high rate of tax, the

enviroment

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environment

isn'

t

defended by

people

or without culture and so on.

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, those are some of

issues

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the issues

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.

On the other hand

, I believe that

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migration isn'

t

indispensable and decisive because all

people

can'

t

move any places.

My

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own view on

this

matter the protective measures should be realized

both

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by both

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the government and citizens

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because

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the relationship

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is crucial so topics. What is

more

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everybody has got the free selection chances so

people

mustn'

t

be directed by the country

.

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As an example, the

work places

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workplaces

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are to created by the country, salaries have to become top that

people

can pay their needs and

others

. Briefly, the moving isn'

t

necessary and crucial the way. To sum up, in my opinion, if so measures are enforced by the country, probably the issues will

decrase

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decrease

in the future and

people

can realize their inhabiting opt more convenient, easier than before time. I have read that from various books, blogs and

others

running never is the solving.