People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems? Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?

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people
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inhabit in large cities so there are more issues
everyday
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Others
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argue that
people
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should be encouraged by the government
moving
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to
rurals
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rural
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others
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of all, as a matter of
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there are some
disdavantages
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disadvantages
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city life. As a pattern more foods, markets,
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shopping
shops
shoppings
are
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, on top of
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there is pollution, throwing rubbish around, lacking
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the oxygen than regional towns. I believe strongly, the problems establish from various reasons like without employment, the high rate of tax, the
enviroment
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environment
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defended by
people
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or without culture and so on.
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, those are some of
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migration isn'
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indispensable and decisive because all
people
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can'
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move any places.
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own view on
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matter the protective measures should be realized
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the government and citizens
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because
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the relationship
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is crucial so topics. What is
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everybody has got the free selection chances so
people
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mustn'
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be directed by the country
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As an example, the
work places
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workplaces
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are to created by the country, salaries have to become top that
people
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can pay their needs and
others
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. Briefly, the moving isn'
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necessary and crucial the way. To sum up, in my opinion, if so measures are enforced by the country, probably the issues will
decrase
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decrease
in the future and
people
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can realize their inhabiting opt more convenient, easier than before time. I have read that from various books, blogs and
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running never is the solving.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban congestion
  • traffic jams
  • lengthy commutes
  • high cost of living
  • financial strain
  • air pollution
  • noise pollution
  • quality of life
  • green space
  • recreational areas
  • social isolation
  • fast-paced lifestyle
  • public services strain
  • overpopulation
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