In a number of countries, some people think that it is necessary to spent large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It is undeniable that nowadays, the world has had changed from a rural society into a modern community which can lead to the

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development and construction of the transportation system in each country. Some people think that new

railway

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lines for the high-speed

trains

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should be built as much as possible, while others believe that the city should be spent

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other public

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high-speed

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. From my point of view,

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improving and constructing every public transport can

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the positive

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, there

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the negative

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. It is true to say that the government of each land should spend

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on constructing new

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tracks for very fast

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between cities because there can

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positive

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to everybody in the country.

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fast

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can better respond to the travel industry than other public

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because the high-speed

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are not restricted about the weight of the luggage, as the result, many tourists who enter the country can save

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on baggage loading, having the high-speed

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can make many visitors to easily access to the attracted locations in each region due to

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stations are frequently constructed closely the city and the interesting locations, compared with the airport where are often located away from the community.

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, the high-speed

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negative

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to residents in the region

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the land price and the accommodation price. While some people argue that the

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should be spent on improving the other public

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as the public bus and the public boat because there can easily access with everybody

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as older and students due to there are low price ticket rather than the high-speed

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some drawbacks.

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, some public

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tourists who have

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, and existing public transport cannot access

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interesting locations. In conclusion, the new

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tracks construction for the high-speed

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between cities and the public transport development can

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both the advantage and the disadvantage to the nations.

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, it is recommended that the government should choose the appropriate use of

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for the maximum benefits of the citizens in each region.

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