The internet contains a lot of information that can help people, however, sometimes the information is inaccurate or wrong. Do you agree or disagree?

The
internet
has a huge amount of
data
that can make
people
's life easier.
Although
, in some
case
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the
information
provided on the
internet
is incorrect.
This
essay agrees with the
second
statement because sometimes the
internet
contains wrong facts and wrong methods relating to
everyday's
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every day's

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work.
Firstly
, several servers on the
internet
possess inappropriate
data
about specific places and
people
.
That is
to, say because individuals frequently search historical
information
about renowned places.
However
, websites in some cases show wrong
information
to
people
.
As a result
,
wrong
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the wrong

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background is told to them.
for instance
, in India, many citizens want to know the history of
Taj
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the Taj

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Mahal.
However
,
the
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Wikipedia does not show them the correct
information
. As a consequence, wrong
data
is given to them.
Secondly
, it displays irrelevant
information
relating to day-to-day activities. That has been said because many users do not know how to do
everyday's
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every day's

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activities
such
as
workout
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workouts

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and exercises. They tend to see videos to make their work simple. But,
people
on the
internet
are not trained adequately.
Therefore
, they teach wrong exercises.
For example
, in the region of Delhi, most residents do running and yoga every morning. They seek help from the
internet
to get their workout done.
However
, they learn from bad teachers and the problem grows more. In conclusion, various websites contain unreliable
data
on their
webpages
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relating to the history and cultural backgrounds of the country.
Moreover
, it
also
disrupts everyday's routine.
Thus
,
this
essay agrees with the
second
statement.
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