Some people believe bicycles have a lot of advantages, whereas others believe bicycles have more disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Currently
we are living in a world where eco-friendly products Add a comma
,Currently
plays
a major role in sustaining our environment. While some people argue that bicycle usage has Change the verb form
play
it's
own merits whereas, others disagree on Correct your spelling
its
this
. This
essay will discuss both views of the argument.
To begin
with, everything comes with it's
own pros and cons. Replace the word
its
Similarly
, using Correct article usage
the cycle
cycle
in our day to day life can have many positive Fix the agreement mistake
cycles
impact
on not only health but Change to a plural noun
impacts
also
on environment
. Add an article
the environment
For example
, bicycle
is the best Add an article
the bicycle
a bicycle
nature friendly
means of transportation which doesn't Add a hyphen
nature-friendly
ommit
any harmful gases for Correct your spelling
omit
commit
emit
environment
. Apart from its natural benefits, it is equally beneficial for one's physical fitness as well. Riding a Add an article
the environment
cycle
for 30 minutes is as good as runnig
for half an hour. One can burn calories while commuting from one place to other by riding a Correct your spelling
running
cycle
.
Consequently
, it has some drawbacks also
. For instance
, it can be time consuming
means of transportation. If a bus or car takes about 40 minutes to reach Add a hyphen
time-consuming
at
destination B from destination A, Change preposition
apply
then
using a cycle
will increase this
duration by double of original time, may be
it can take more Correct your spelling
maybe
also
depending upon how efficient the person is in riding a cycle
. Apart from this
, using Correct article usage
a bicycle
bicycle
depends on weather conditions Fix the agreement mistake
bicycles
also
. People can not use it during harsh winters or flooding monsoon season. Moreover
, cycles provide energy consuming
rides. It won't be Add a hyphen
energy-consuming
favorable
for people who finish their duties late in the night or early in the morning since they won't have sufficient strength to ride it after finishing a hectic duty.
In conclusion, according to my opinion, Change the spelling
favourable
cycle
usage can be a great initiative towards pollution control and healthy
lifestyle but we need to consider Correct article usage
a healthy
it's
limitations Correct your spelling
its
also
to avoid any adverse effects on Correct your spelling
humankind
human kind
.Correct your spelling
humankind
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