You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter Correct the information in the article Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to inform you that in your latest edition of the travel magazine there is a critical mistake about the information on my home city, Kolkata. Although
the rest of the article about various monuments are interesting, the mistake committed is vital. It says that the “Indian Museum”’ that is
located in the heart of the city is not the largest one in the country.
Let me explain to you in more detail. The “Indian Museum” is the pride for the city dwellers; thus
, their eyes shine in glory whenever they discuss this
historic building. It has an enormous collection of immensely rare commodities that have a tremendous historical reference. Moreover
, students across the globe visit here to complete their research work. Henceforth, it is not fair to play with the sentiment of ‘’The Bengali’’ community.
Can I please suggest you print an apology message in your next
edition? Besides
that, it will be great if you re-write the article again so that everyone gets the appropriate fact. I look forward to hearing from you.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
ShreyaSubmitted by abhinaba.de on
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