You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter Correct the information in the article Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation.

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Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing

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letter to inform you that in your latest edition of the travel magazine there is a critical mistake about the information on my home city, Kolkata.

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the rest of the article about various monuments are interesting, the mistake committed is vital. It says that the “Indian Museum”’

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located in the heart of the city is not the largest one in the country. Let me explain to you in more detail. The “Indian Museum” is the pride for the city dwellers;

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, their eyes shine in glory whenever they discuss

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historic building. It has an enormous collection of immensely rare commodities that have a tremendous historical reference.

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, students across the globe visit here to complete their research work. Henceforth, it is not fair to play with the sentiment of ‘’The Bengali’’ community. Can I please suggest you print an apology message in your

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edition?

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that, it will be great if you re-write the article again so that everyone gets the appropriate fact. I look forward to hearing from you. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Shreya

abhinaba.deSat Jul 31 2021

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

190 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Rectify
Misrepresentation
Tourism
Editor
Credibility
Accuracy
Local heritage
Fact-checking
Repercussions
Counteractive measures
Publishing ethics
Clarification
Factual error
Misconception
Authenticity

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