Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Modern
lifestyle has resulted Correct article usage
The modern
into
an Change preposition
in
increased
in a lot of unwanted Replace the word
increase
child
Correct your spelling
childbirth
birth
. Ending a life before it is actually born has become quite common nowadays. While some people believe it should be allowed to kill a
life before its Remove the article
apply
birth
, others believe it should be restricted. This
essay will discuss reasons
Correct article usage
the reasons
of
my partial agreement on both statements with relevant examples.
Change preposition
for
To begin
with, aborting any unwanted pregnancy is as common as treating any fever and it has been widely accepted by many people. Some believe that it should be legal to abort fetus
and I agree with the statement Add an article
the fetus
a fetus
with
Change preposition
for
following
Correct article usage
the following
resons
. If parents come to know about any deadly genetic or neurological conditions in Correct your spelling
reasons
fetus
which can risk Add an article
the fetus
life
of the mother as well as Add an article
the life
baby
Add an article
a baby
than
it is necessary to end that risk factor at the initial stage to avoid any Correct your spelling
then
further
complications. For example
, in some cases
babies are born with deadly conditions like Add a comma
,cases
tumor
in Change the spelling
tumour
brain
and those have very low chances of survival and have rare possibilities of Add an article
the brain
the
treatment.
Correct article usage
apply
On the other hand
, it is argued that abortion should be considered as
Change preposition
apply
a
illegal procedure. I agree with Change the article
an
this
statment
for Correct your spelling
statement
following
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the following
resons
. In some communities of India, people still do not appreciate Correct your spelling
reasons
birth
of a Add an article
the birth
girl
child
even after many initiative
Change to a plural noun
initiatives
Add a missing verb
have taken
taken
place by Add the auxiliary verb
took
has taken
government
of India to save Add an article
the government
girl
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a girl
child
. Many times, a women
has to go through multiple abortions just because she is carrying a Change the noun form
woman
girl
child
and sometimes it results into
Change preposition
in
death
of the mother. Currently, we are living in a society Correct article usage
the death
which
provides equal opportunities to both men and women. So, it should equally support Correct pronoun usage
that
birth
of a Add an article
the birth
girl
as well as a boy.
In conclusion, for above
reasons, aborting a Correct article usage
the above
child
should be considered as
legal or illegal depending upon Change preposition
apply
situation
. If Add an article
the situation
fetus
is growing with abnormalities Add an article
the fetus
a fetus
which
can not be treated Correct pronoun usage
that
than
it should be allowed to abort Replace the word
then
it
to avoid any Correct pronoun usage
apply
further
risks. On the other hand
, abortion on basis of gender detection should be banned and both girl
Change to a plural noun
girls
as well as boy
Add the comma(s)
, as well as boy child,
child
should have equal rights.Fix the agreement mistake
children
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