people naturally resist making changes in their lives. what kind of problem can this cause? what solution can you suggest

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Sometimes human’s unconscious prevents them from being part of a new experience in their
life
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new challenges (jobs, business, studies…) and after years they stay in the same stage as they were before. One effective way which is psychologist taking about
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learning from previous mistakes and take it as a bridge to the future. Everybody had bad memories from the time they decided
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change
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in their
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suddenly everything went wrong, and they could not reach
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their goals at that moment, but the point is they could try harder for
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time. they should stand after each fall if they want to build their own path and learn from
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decisions. Anybody who wants to make difference in their
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should make new habits. Recent research shows us takes 21 days to make a new habit,
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if someone usually
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up at noon it takes 21 days to change and get used to early morning, the problem is people do not have enough patient and desire for
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adjustment
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they void doing them at all. I think the obvious solution is they persist to changes
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, it seems small and inconsiderable and takes their steps with hope because if folks switching progressively, it might be easier for them. In conclusion, people they must know that making mistakes is the way to understands what the problems are and how to fix them,
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they should not have fears from accepting new challenges in their
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because of the oncoming mistakes in the future,
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they could get professional help from a psychologist to accomplish changes. They
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should be aware that every transition takes time, and they could not jump to
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lifestyle.
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